Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetable to some countries where such plants hardly grown or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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recent years and it

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to have an upward trend in the future,

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there are several positive comments about it, there are still some controversial views

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its disadvantages

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as the uses of chemical to keep them fresh and usable.

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essay agrees with the first

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because it

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a bright road to develop in the next decade

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many experiments all around the

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and will shed

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light on the reason why. It can be easily observed that

vegetable

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can be spoiled in a short time so

transport

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it

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in

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a long period may be harmful

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consumers, especially when it was moved by planes

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the thick atmosphere in the sky.

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, it will make the fruits rapidly

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rotten

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on the ground and most

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companies and governments all over the

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always want to transport it in

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large

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so it will cause devastating consequences to not only the

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who buy these

fruit

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but

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the one who provide it. Turning to the former opinion, it should be realized that technology has a profound impact on the way humans make

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idea

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possible and we must

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recognize that our modern society will always go up until there

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no humans

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world

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so all of the negative effects come from the opposite

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could be gotten rid of by our intelligence. Artificial chemicals which was used to protect the

fresh

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of exported plants could

be replace

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by some natural elements which may not be

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on the Earth. Taking everything into account, it must be important to know that things will never stop changing especially our society and we will always develop to become better forms so aircraft will no longer be used widely to ship goods around

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world

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,

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writer has explained the reasons for the

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of transporting by

airplanes

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