Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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are divided on whether

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can be used to deliver fruit and vegetables to countries where are lacking of plants or whether some people believe that it is not a good way because of causing negative effects.

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I understand the reason behind the former view, I am still in

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of the latter. Proponent of the idea that using aircraft which is a good trend to transport food to poor

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can save a lot of time. Thanks to

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, citizens of the country who get a low quality

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food can approach fresh fruit and vegetables. India or Singapore is an example; they do not have enough

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employees to grow food.

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, the impact of weather is another issue

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them hard to plant

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. So

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now is the best solution that can solve

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problem.

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, I still hold the belief that even though we can have lots of beneficial things from using aircraft, it is still

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many problems that we cannot tackle in the future. Causing pollution and

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is one of the most serious

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that human has faced. The activations of engines in

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require tonners of fuel like gas, oil,

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,

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it is a way

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the atmosphere worse.

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the world reported that 27% of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere

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the air quality of numerous countries,

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effect. In conclusion, I acknowledge aircraft contributes

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transportation industry, but the backwoods of airline transit were

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it should not have

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, the world will face

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environmental degradation leading to various consequences