Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Opinion
are divided on whether Fix the agreement mistake
Opinions
plane
can be used to deliver fruit and vegetables to countries where are lacking of plants or whether some people believe that it is not a good way because of causing negative effects. Fix the agreement mistake
planes
While
I understand the reason behind the former view, I am still in favor
of the latter.
Proponent of the idea that using aircraft which is a good trend to transport food to poor Change the spelling
favour
region
can save a lot of time. Thanks to Fix the agreement mistake
regions
incredible
speed of Add an article
the incredible
Add an article
the plane
a plane
plane
, citizens of the country who get a low quality Fix the agreement mistake
planes
of
food can approach fresh fruit and vegetables. India or Singapore is an example; they do not have enough Change preposition
apply
plan
or Fix the agreement mistake
plans
also
employees to grow food. Rephrase
apply
Moreover
, the impact of weather is another issue make
them hard to plant Correct pronoun usage
that make
tree
. So Add an article
a tree
airplane
now is the best solution that can solve Change the spelling
aeroplane
this
problem.
Nevertheless
, I still hold the belief that even though we can have lots of beneficial things from using aircraft, it is still have
many problems that we cannot tackle in the future. Causing pollution and Unnecessary verb
apply
effecting
Correct your spelling
affecting
environment
is one of the most serious Correct article usage
the environment
issue
that human has faced. The activations of engines in Change to a plural noun
issues
plane
require tonners of fuel like gas, oil, Fix the agreement mistake
planes
Correct word choice
and coals
coals
, Fix the agreement mistake
coal
thus
it is a way Change preposition
of making
making
the atmosphere worse. Change the verb form
to make
A research
held Correct article usage
Research
in
the world reported that 27% of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere Change preposition
around
affect
the air quality of numerous countries, Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
it
Correct word choice
and it
also
the reason Add a missing verb
is also
causing
Change preposition
for causing
greenhouse
effect.
In conclusion, I acknowledge aircraft contributes Add an article
a greenhouse
the greenhouse
huge
to Change the adjective
hugely
freight
transportation industry, but the backwoods of airline transit were Add an article
the freight
showed
Wrong verb form
shown
thus
it should not have overused
. Add a missing verb
been overused
Otherwise
, the world will face an
environmental degradation leading to various consequencesCorrect article usage
apply
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