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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetable to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out season. Some people consider it a good idea, some are not. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Delivery by plane has been popularly used to transport crops to
countries
 where are lacking plants. It was considered as a good trend, but the reserve is
also
 agreed by some people. My essay will demonstrate why many encourage
this
 tendency
while
 others believe that there are more useful methods for transferring. On the one hand, advocates of air transport argue that it offers many benefits.
Firstly
, it enables consumers to enjoy a wider variety of fresh produce throughout the year, regardless of location.
This
 can lead to a more balanced and nutritious diet.
Secondly
, air transport can boost the economies of developing
countries
 by providing them with a lucrative export market for their agricultural produce.
Thirdly
, it can help to ensure
food
 security in regions that are prone to natural disasters or other disruptions to
food
 production.
On the other hand
, people believe that trading
food
 items is not beneficial because they think the best
quality
 vegetables and fruits are sent to other nations
while
 citizens of that country get poor
quality
food
 and products which is the main reason.
Also
, first preference is given to exporting
quality
 rather than selling it to their own people.
For example
, the
Food
 and Safety Department in India revealed their research on exporting
quality
 that 80 per cent of the best fruits, vegetables, pulses and other items are sent to other
countries
whereas
 Indians purchase the remaining low
quality
 in their own motherland.
However
,
this
 is not the case in every country and can easily be solved.
Thus
, the government ought to control the
quality
 check system and try to maintain a system of transportation of
food
. To recapitulate, by taking all the aforementioned arguments into deep consideration it is apparent that the benefits of aircraft are too great to ignore the demerits of any products in the current age.
Although
 there are some non-negligible impacts of aircraft, it is
also
 vital for
the
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countries
 where
such
 plants hardly grow or are out of season.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Perishable
  • Food security
  • Exporting
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Expensive
  • Consumers
  • Logistics
  • Efficient
  • Accessibility
  • Sustainability
  • Global trade
  • Climate change
  • Market demand
  • Cultivated
  • Out of season
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