Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow on are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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increased in some nations where plants out of season

are

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rarely thrive. It is believed that

this

is a smart move, whilst, others

are strongly disagree

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with it. I am more inclined toward the latter view and

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explain the reason for my choice in the following paragraphs. On the one hand,

countries

which have poor

condition

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conditions

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for

agriculture

have development potential through

in

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exporting fruit and

vegetable

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. In a recent survey in developing

countries

, almost the profit from exporting

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accounted for the highest in the

economy

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structure.

Besides

, some developed

countries

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formed

of

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agriculture

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still continued to invest in its field in

this

age.

Moreover

, these

countries

could depend on biotechnology

instead

of harsh and traditional

technique

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. Not only in favour of economic benefit

,

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but

also

develop in

technology

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the technology

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field.

For instance

, India

have

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great effort in

agriculture

which has created the

agriculture

evolution and have

a lots

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of great

achivement

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achievement

achievements

that contribute to the state-of-the-art technology in aircraft.

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, investing in

agriculture

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potential development via the economy change.

On the other hand

, these

countries

have to deal with a massive amount of

tax

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such

as

airplane

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tax

, product

tax

and

also

the export

tax

.

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money

loss

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from these

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definetely

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outweigh the

benefit

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they bring.

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the

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large amount of

tax

would

damaged

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the economy of that nation.

Furthermore

, the

money

from exporting these agricultural products can pay back the

airplane

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fee.

However

, the

money

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biggest opportunity is to balance the

money

, which may have no benefit or

also

make a considerable loss in the long term.

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, focusing on the side which that nation has

the

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poor

condition

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to deal with

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halted the development of the other stronger potential industries.

Therefore

,

this

is a serious risk that may have a negative impact on the

countrie's

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country's

economic structure. In conclusion, fruit and vegetables are being increasingly

tranported

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transported

to

countries

where plants hardly grow. I disagree with

this

statement

due to

the risk that

happen

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to the nation by importing

this

product.

However

,

this

may be

opportunity

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to develop in the weakness of

that

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countries

.