The diagram below shows the process of yoghurt making. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process of yoghurt making. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The flow chart illustrates the
yoghurt making
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procedure.
Overall
, the process involves eight steps which can be grouped into three main stages; preparation of the
milk
, mixing the ingredients and setting the
yoghurt
. In terms of preparing
milk
, it is first heated to 100 degrees Celsius on the stove.
Following
this
, it is taken off the heat in order to be cooled to a moderately warm temperature. As far as the second stage of mixing the ingredients is concerned, a little cold
milk
is added to some old
yoghurt
to thin it, after which the
yoghurt
and cold
milk
are whisked together until the mixture is a smooth consistency with no lumps.
Subsequently
, the mixture is poured into the warm wilk. The final stage is setting the
yoghurt
. After the
yoghurt
has been wrapped in towels to maintain the slightly heated temperature, it is left to set for four hours.
Lastly
, the
yoghurt
is stored in the refrigerator to keep it cool.
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