The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004

The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004
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The bar chart above illustrates the expected highest population of Asian
elephants
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.
Overall
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, there was a downward trend in the figure of
elephants
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in the countries listed. In 1997, standing at 10000
individuals
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, India was the country which owned the most
elephants
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, followed by Myanmar with about 6000, and Thailand with 4000.
While
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there was a sharp decrease in the figure of beasts in India and Thailand, a slight decrease was seen in Myanmar. In 2004, the
number
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of
individuals
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in India decreased by 2000,
while
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in Thailand, it decreased by more than
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half, from 4000 to only 1800. Myanmar dropped slightly, from about 6000 to 5500.
On the other hand
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, in 1997, the
number
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of
elephants
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in Vietnam, Laos and Cambodia was the same, with about 1500
individuals
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,
while
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in Sri Lanka and Malaysia, it was 3000. China was the least with only 1000
individuals
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. After 7 years, the
number
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of
elephants
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in Vietnam, Laos and Sri Lanka decreased slightly,
while
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the
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of beasts in Malaysia and China decreased
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half.
Additionally
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, the figure
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Cambodia slightly increased.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words elephants, individuals, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • decline
  • increase
  • drop
  • steady decrease
  • recover
  • habitat loss
  • poaching
  • efforts
  • protect
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