You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Afshin, I'm writing

this

letter to you to tell you about

last

Sunday. I know that the holiday was really important for you. But I'm sure that you understand that being my son in hospital with an order of surgery, how much can affect any programme. I owe you an apology for

this

happening,

also

I think that I should tell you that I loved to be in your warm hospitality.

However

this

year my life has become out of my control,

moreover

, you know that I can't come to England

this

autumn.

This

autumn, our company is full of new colleagues who are junior and we must teach them a lot of data about our technology. In the end, I hope I see you at Christmas for about 4 days in Australia. because I know that you're one of the real lovers of warm January All the best. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours Sincerely, Ramin Raman

Submitted by Ramin1991 on Mon Oct 23 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

160 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people choose to commute to work by public transportation. However, others prefer to use their own private cars. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how these problems can be tackled?

in many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

Social media badly impact our relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree