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The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.
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The given maps depict the created changes in a small city in the 28-year period from 1995 till now. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is noticed that there are a lot of houses on the present
map
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. So, in 1995,
while
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 farmland was located in the northeast
corner
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 of the
map
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, a forest park was at the bottom of it. A majority of homes were made in the northwest
corner
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. The five shops saw the cross of the street,
as well as
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 a big fish market, had been located in front of
shops
Correct article usage
the shops
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. In the present
map
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, it had been made a lot of alternatives which include a golf ground and tennis site in the northeast
corner
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instead
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 of the farmland and the forest park, respectively.
Moreover
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, a restaurant has been established
instead
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 of shops. As shown in the new
map
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, the four apartments have been located in the southwest
corner
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 of the
map
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, corner with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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