The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
The following bar chart enumerates the percentages of various
degrees
held after post-school by males and females in the country of Australia over the course of the year 1999.
Overall
, the education level is categorized into five grades, which include: master's degree, postgraduate diploma
, bachelor's degree, undergraduate diploma
, and skilled vocational diploma
; moreover
, this
chart depicts different rates of men and women who are carrying these levels of degrees
.
Firstly
, 70% of women had undergraduate diplomas
, 40% of girls had master's degrees
, and 50% of females were done with bachelor's degrees
. Furthermore
, other percentages are sectioned into skilled vocational diplomas
and postgraduate diplomas
, which are 10% and 30%, respectively.
Conversely
, 90% of men held skilled vocational diplomas
, and 70% went to postgraduate diploma
holders. Additionally
, 60% of Australian men were with master's degrees
, and approximately 47% had bachelor's degrees
. Lastly
, only about 37% of boys had undergraduate diplomas
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