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The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
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The following bar chart enumerates the percentages of various
degrees
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 held after post-school by males and females in the country of Australia over the course of the year 1999.
Overall
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, the education level is categorized into five grades, which include: master's degree, postgraduate
diploma
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, bachelor's degree, undergraduate
diploma
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, and skilled vocational
diploma
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;
moreover
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,
this
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 chart depicts different rates of men and women who are carrying these levels of
degrees
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.
Firstly
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, 70% of women had undergraduate
diplomas
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, 40% of girls had master's
degrees
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, and 50% of females were done with bachelor's
degrees
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.
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, other percentages are sectioned into skilled vocational
diplomas
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 and postgraduate
diplomas
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, which are 10% and 30%, respectively.
Conversely
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, 90% of men held skilled vocational
diplomas
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, and 70% went to postgraduate
diploma
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 holders.
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, 60% of Australian men were with master's
degrees
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, and approximately 47% had bachelor's
degrees
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.
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, only about 37% of boys had undergraduate
diplomas
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words degrees, diploma, diplomas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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