ThMany supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
In
this
contemporary era, a numerous
number of stores tend to sell items that have been made in a different country. The lower price of Correct word choice
large
such
products
is the main culprit of this
phenomenon, and this
would have a negative impact on the local economy.
To embark on, the low expense of a wide variety of agricultural products
is what attracts most individuals to purchase it
which ,in turn, Correct pronoun usage
apply
impose
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imposes
supermarkets'
owners to buy these imported Change noun form
supermarkets
products
in order to embrace the increasing demand of consumers. In other words
, each type of crops
needs a certain condition to grow. Fix the agreement mistake
crop
Thus
, the availability of the appropriate circumstances in a country makes this
specific crop inexpensive compared with different countries where the perfect conditions might not be available. Accordingly
, high
sum of money should be allocated to implant Add an article
the high
a high
such
a crop. For instance
, in Iraq, the government has been spending thousands of dollars annually to grow some tropical fruits which will not be affordable for most citizens compared to low cost
crops from other countries. What can be said here is that Add a hyphen
low-cost
the
affordability is the main factor that determines what owners of supermarkets should provide to their customers.
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apply
Nevertheless
, despite the above-mentioned point
it can be assumed that buying food Add a comma
point,
products
which are not locally made will, eventually, weaken the local economy. To illuminate, one of the most important sources of money that enters state coffers is agricultural production. Therefore
, decreasing demand to purchase local
sourced food might have a detrimental impact on economic growth. Change the adjective
locally
This
can be exemplified by an article conducted by a group of Iraqi economists which claimed that the ongoing trend of buying inexpensive imported food has been costing the government around three million dollars annually. This
example shows that buying foreign products
affect
negatively Verb problem
apply
affect
the developmental process of Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
economy
.
In conclusion, Add an article
the economy
after
this
essay has reiterated above-mentioned
points, it can be assumed Correct article usage
the above-mentioned
the
availability and Correct your spelling
that
the
low expenses are the main reasons for increasing Correct article usage
apply
purchasing
rate of foreign Correct article usage
the purchasing
products
, and this
could have dire consequences on economic
growth of a nation.Add an article
the economic
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