Although families have influence on children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a growing public opinion that even though

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have an undeniable impact on the evolution of

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, activities away from the family play a bigger role. I partially agree with

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notion because

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spend most of their

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at

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and

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barely interact with their

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as they work and come home exhausted;

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, there are inevitable factors related to how

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affect

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throughout their early development process.

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with,

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spend most of their

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outside.

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,

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learn most of

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knowledge at

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. A major regard to take into account is that since boarding schools remain prevalent, schoolboys and girls become more likely to be raised by other people rather than their

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. The cases of

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who attend normal schools are not prominently different either. Mostly, the

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schedule starts early in the morning and lasts until late afternoon or evening. The schedules differ from country to country, yet

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any case, it includes a significant part within a day. Precisely, Asian countries impose a relatively stricter table.

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, in Japan, China, South and North Korea,

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spend almost the whole day at

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.

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explicitly indicates that

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are more likely to be raised

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under external factors,

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, they embrace their main views towards several matters outside the home.

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, schoolboys and girls usually have busy

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who are mostly concerned about their work. Alike their

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,

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start working rather early and come home late.

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, both the

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and the

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spend a similar amount of

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outside,

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retain much less energy as they are aged.

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, in turn, leads to a lack of communication between the two sides. In fact, most

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are unhappy

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the fact that they barely interact with their

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.

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family members spend less

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together, major differences arise in personalities and views and

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is defined as a general problem in the new generation.

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,

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have a significant impact on

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in most cases.

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is because

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mostly embrace what their family teaches throughout their early childhood. And the way the

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are raised strongly depends on their family.

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, The Turkish Olympics champion Mete Gazoz was born to become a flawless archer as his

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wanted him to be. His father and mother did lots of research to increase his accuracy in shooting and they eventually had Gazoz taking piano,

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classes

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dancing classes to build his impeccable career in archery. Not to forget that expatriates

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encounter cultural shocks because the most crucial manners and etiquette are transferred

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from their

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throughout their childhood.

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leaves no doubt that it cannot be denied family has an inevitable influence.

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,

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begin embracing their personality and manners within the family environment, yet afterwards, they gradually become encompassed by an external entourage which eventually leads them to their ultimate development.