Although families have influence on children’s development, factors outside the home play a bigger part in their lives nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a growing public opinion that even though

parents

have an undeniable impact on the evolution of

children

, activities away from the family play a bigger role. I partially agree with

this

notion because

juveniles

spend most of their

time

at

school

and

parents

barely interact with their

children

as they work and come home exhausted;

however

, there are inevitable factors related to how

parents

affect

youngsters

throughout their early development process.

To begin

with,

children

spend most of their

time

outside.

As a result

,

juveniles

learn most of

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knowledge at

school

. A major regard to take into account is that since boarding schools remain prevalent, schoolboys and girls become more likely to be raised by other people rather than their

parents

. The cases of

children

who attend normal schools are not prominently different either. Mostly, the

school

schedule starts early in the morning and lasts until late afternoon or evening. The schedules differ from country to country, yet

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any case, it includes a significant part within a day. Precisely, Asian countries impose a relatively stricter table.

For example

, in Japan, China, South and North Korea,

youngsters

spend almost the whole day at

school

.

This

explicitly indicates that

children

are more likely to be raised

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under external factors,

moreover

, they embrace their main views towards several matters outside the home.

On the other hand

, schoolboys and girls usually have busy

parents

who are mostly concerned about their work. Alike their

children

,

parents

start working rather early and come home late.

Although

, both the

parents

and the

juveniles

spend a similar amount of

time

outside,

parents

retain much less energy as they are aged.

This

, in turn, leads to a lack of communication between the two sides. In fact, most

youngsters

are unhappy

due to

the fact that they barely interact with their

parents

.

While

family members spend less

time

together, major differences arise in personalities and views and

this

is defined as a general problem in the new generation.

On the contrary

,

parents

have a significant impact on

children

in most cases.

This

is because

juveniles

mostly embrace what their family teaches throughout their early childhood. And the way the

youngsters

are raised strongly depends on their family.

For instance

, The Turkish Olympics champion Mete Gazoz was born to become a flawless archer as his

parents

wanted him to be. His father and mother did lots of research to increase his accuracy in shooting and they eventually had Gazoz taking piano,

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classes

as well as

dancing classes to build his impeccable career in archery. Not to forget that expatriates

also

encounter cultural shocks because the most crucial manners and etiquette are transferred

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from their

parents

throughout their childhood.

This

leaves no doubt that it cannot be denied family has an inevitable influence.

To sum up

,

children

begin embracing their personality and manners within the family environment, yet afterwards, they gradually become encompassed by an external entourage which eventually leads them to their ultimate development.