New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology has been increasingly developing in recent days, and

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developments have made some changes, including

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workers to do certain jobs in our daily life.

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essay will examine the advantages and the disadvantages of new technology’s effects on today’s

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market

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and will explain how the advantages

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the drawbacks. New technologies, especially artificial intelligence, have numerous

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on our lives.

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, some

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to translate articles to different languages faster and cheaper than any teachers.

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the

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opportunities of teachers or force them to develop their career.

It is clear that

as long as technology develops, people have to improve their abilities to survive.

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of

applications

makes our personal information more accessible.

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, when we use an application to find the shortest route to our destination

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as Google Maps or Yandex, we share our current location with the server, and

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some hackers can reach

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data easily

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the code of the application. Despite some shortcomings, new technologies

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individuals influx of benefits. Looking more closely at new development’s position in

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lives, it can easily seen that new devices replaced workers to do physical tasks. That means actually, workers do not lose their

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whereas

their

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opportunities change from labor to becoming a manager.

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gives them a chance

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more leisure time which may make them happier,

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and more satisfied.

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individuals who

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suffer from a disease may interact

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doctor easily via an application

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their smartphones or may monitor their test results without visiting a hospital.

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the patient and doctors.

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, mitigate the hospital’s daily patient number which

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better experiment

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who need urgent treatment. In conclusion, it is completely understandable that every invention may have benefits and disadvantages. Regardless of the technological developments, as long as people spend effort

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adapting developments, it is

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obvious

that

advantages

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far exceed than disadvantages. In order to make

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adaptation

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process easier government may set some

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or courses to educate their citizens.