aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of reason. some people consider it is a good idea, some are not. Discuss both views and your opinion.

Presently, the topic of the role of aircraft in delivering essentials to

countries

where plants are hard to grow or for other reasons. It is the opinion of

this

writer that plane plays a vital part in the development of providing

countries

and provided ones. It must be understood that

food

import improves the state of lacking

food

which some

countries

have had. Thanks to the highly

high-qualified

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high-quality

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technology, fruits and vegetables which

is

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are

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transported by aeroplanes maintain fresh and healthy.

Therefore

, it supplies a variety of nutrients which people need.

For example

, some

Africa

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African

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countries

are facing the crisis of lacking

food

,and a high number of children die

due to

starve

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starvation

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, they can improve

this

condition by receiving support from other

countries

. There is;

however

, a group of citizens who would disagree with

this

, and consider aircraft increase environmental pollution.

Such

belief stems from a suggestion that exhaust from planes contains many air pollutants. That brings about a number of respiratory diseases

such

as asthma,and lung disease. The writer's opinion advocates aeroplanes

also

have benefits for suppliers. They earn profits from

food

exports. Most of the products come from rural areas, government can equally develop farming methods.

For instance

, to

countries

which

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geographical location is appropriate to concentrate on expanding

agricultural

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the agricultural

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industry

such

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as

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in America, their governments can maximize the profits coming from rural areas by utilising land to grow plants. In conclusion,

while

there is an argument

whether

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about whether

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using planes to transport

food

is a good or bad idea, I believe it is more beneficial to apply it

due to

its positiveness.

Therefore

, it should be used in other parts to optimize these advantages.