Many people today are dissatisfied with their current jobs. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this?

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Numerous prospective
employees
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choose incorrect
degree
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fields when they are becoming
students
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and graduate
schools
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. It leads to the disappointed feelings that
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during their
future
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working period of life.
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,
schools
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and universities are able to prevent the problem. To start with, the main reason, in my opinion, which is affected by the negative feelings among the
employees
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is formed when
students
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graduate their high school. They are not able to get a significant amount of their life
experience
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and develop a wide outlook during a school period. It
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because the majority
subjects
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of subjects
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in student
plan
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based
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mostly on theory. It leads to difficulties because candidates are not able to form an advanced
experience
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about their
future
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job
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. They can achieve it mostly
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a practical way.
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, if
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crack the books and
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only theory, they will not get a full imagination about their
future
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degree
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. Afterwards, when
students
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are becoming to
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postgraduates and
employees
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, most of them will have undelighted emotions
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their work and
field
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in general. On the opposite side, educational institutes can solve the problem. Nowadays, career orientation classes are becoming widespread among numerous universities and
schools
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. It presents possibilities for prospective
students
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: they can try and
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themselves in a certain
field
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and gain
experience
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,
knowledge
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and knowledge
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and make their
world view
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worldview
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more sophisticated.
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, the candidate highlighted scientific subjects and thinking about developing in medicine. The school cooperates with the
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to organise a medical class, where the student is able to get advanced data,
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and knowledge
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and
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a
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part in practical exercises and meetings, which are realised by staff and
students
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from the
university
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. Afterwards, the educational
field
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will become more visible. It can help prospective
students
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to make a considered decision for their
future
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degree
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at
university
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and
job
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.
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, making a deeply analysed decision based on gained
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,
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will affect
prospective
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the prospective
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work and behaviour of
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employees
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. In conclusion, a significant amount of
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are getting negative emotions, because they
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able to gain
a knowledge
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in a practical way, to see the visibility structure of their
field
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and form a point of view for their
future
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job
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.
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, if the
schools
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continue to develop the idea of career orientation classes, the prospective
students
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will make considerate decisions for their
future
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university
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degree
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degrees
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and
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job
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jobs
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.
Subsequently
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,
this
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phenomenon will affect
on
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their
job
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sensations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Unfulfilling job
  • Mental health
  • Physical health
  • Financial stability
  • Job security
  • Societal norms
  • Career choices
  • Pursuing passion
  • Practicality
  • Personal growth
  • Skill development
  • Self-esteem
  • Social status
  • Work-life balance
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