The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the ratio of young male
smokers
in seven different countries (Armenia
, Egypt, Lebanon, Bangladesh
, Cuba, Mexico
, and Australia
.) and compares their percentage
with the world within 15 years. Units were measured in percentage
.
Overall
, the percentage
of male smokers
fluctuated throughout the years but their percentage
in Armenia
and Bangladesh
were greater as compared to other rustics. Whereas
, Mexico
and Australia
contain the least number.
To begin
with, the rate of adult smokers
in Armenia
in the year 2000 is at a high percentage
among all other bucolics. It is almost near to touching 70%. Whereas
this
percentage
was decreased in Bangladesh
it was about 62 % respectively. While
Mexico
contained about above 30% and Australia
is at lowest and in that they were about near to 30 %.
Secondly
, in the year 2015, this
ratio decreased in Armenia
and Bangladesh
and reached about 50 % in Armenia
and below 40% in Bangladesh
. Similarly
, Mexico
and Australia
contain a reduced number of smokers
about 20% and 15% respectively.Submitted by aimenmalik2021 on
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