The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of young male
smokers
in seven different countries (
Armenia
, Egypt, Lebanon,
Bangladesh
, Cuba,
Mexico
, and
Australia
.) and compares their
percentage
with the world within 15 years. Units were measured in
percentage
.
Overall
, the
percentage
of male
smokers
fluctuated throughout the years but their
percentage
in
Armenia
and
Bangladesh
were greater as compared to other rustics.
Whereas
,
Mexico
and
Australia
contain the least number.
To begin
with, the rate of adult
smokers
in
Armenia
in the year 2000 is at a high
percentage
among all other bucolics. It is almost near to touching 70%.
Whereas
this
percentage
was decreased in
Bangladesh
it was about 62 % respectively.
While
Mexico
contained about above 30% and
Australia
is at lowest and in that they were about near to 30 %.
Secondly
, in the year 2015,
this
ratio decreased in
Armenia
and
Bangladesh
and reached about 50 % in
Armenia
and below 40% in
Bangladesh
.
Similarly
,
Mexico
and
Australia
contain a reduced number of
smokers
about 20% and 15% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words smokers, armenia, bangladesh, mexico, australia, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart, percentage, adult male smokers
  • world average, increased, decreased
  • tobacco consumption, lung cancer
  • public health, awareness campaigns
  • government policy, smoking bans
  • health risks, nicotine, tobacco industry
  • chart analysis, data comparison
  • statistical trend, significant fluctuation
  • stagnation, steady rise, moderate fall
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