The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The diagram provides information about the modifications that
were
appeared at West Park Secondary Verb problem
have
School
since it’s
established in 1950.
Wrong verb form
it was
Overall
, a comparison of the three diagrams reveals a change in functional, urbanisation and modernisation ways. There were some significant changes
during 1950 and 1980 (the school
had become more urbanised and had some functional changes
by 1980). Afterwards, the building had had some minor modifications in sizes
of the spaces in the areas by 2010.
It’s noticeable that the area Correct article usage
the sizes
had
become more functional and adjusted to the Wrong verb form
has
city
standards. The building had some minor functional Change noun form
city's
changes
: it’s
Verb problem
it
become
Wrong verb form
became
to
the status «Main building» in 1980. It can be seen that the Change preposition
apply
school
invented the car park and science block in the north-western side where the houses were located in 1950. Also
, the new sports field is
occupied the area of farmland Unnecessary verb
apply
on
the south-western part in 1980.
Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, the area had some moderately
Change the adverb
moderate
changes
and transformed in a practical way in a
period from 1950 to 1980. The car park Correct article usage
the
was
occupied the entire western part of the Unnecessary verb
apply
school
. The sport
field was moved to the south-eastern part and reduced some space. Change the noun form
sports
Consequently
, the play ground
was become slightly smaller than in 1980 and was relocated Correct your spelling
playground
on
Change preposition
to
more
western side than the sports field.Correct article usage
a more
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