The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph provides information about the quantity of
shops
, which stopped working and started their business during 2018 and 2018.
In general, it is noticeable that the shops
, which was
opened during the period of time, have a significant downward trend compared to the closed Correct subject-verb agreement
were
shops
, which shows a steadily
fall in the Change the word
steady
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
shops
.
It was a significant decrease and, on the other hand
, increase
in the Correct article usage
an increase
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
started working
Add a hyphen
started-working
shops
from 2011 to 2014 (8500 shops
compared to 4000 in 2012 and 6000 in 2014). Afterwards, there was a steadily
fall in 2015 (from 6000 Change the word
steady
shops
to 4000 shops
). A slightly
fluctuation can be Change the adverb
slight
also
observed in 2017, which led to a slight decrease in 2018 (from 4000 shops
to 3000).
On the other hand
, the quantity
of closed Change the quantifier
number
shops
had a slight fluctuation, which led to decrease
and increase in the Correct article usage
a decrease
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
shops
from 2011 to 2014 (from 6500 shops
to 6700 approximately). However
, there was a dramatically
drop in 2015 (from 6700 to 500 Change the adverb
dramatic
shops
) and Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply
increase in 2016 (from 500 to 5100 Change the word
sharp
shops
approximately). Afterwards, its
noticeable a slight fluctuation in Replace the word
it's
it is
numbers
to
2018, but the Change preposition
in
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
shops
remained stable.Submitted by fedorusa2016 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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