Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050. Do you agree or disagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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education plays
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that the
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in 2050. I somehow agree with
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education is essential in
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the time of corona the online classes
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place which was a great example. The students started
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on online methods of attending classes via
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meetings and
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being introduced in the
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basic and similar. The pedagogy skills must be changed so far. So,
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subjects like science and biology which
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practical methods must be
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by some online techniques. Which will
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online
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knowledge
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fit into the mind rather than presence in person. If we see some graphical scenes or videos related to study material with just a click it
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quickly my our mind for
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technology will replace the method of teaching and
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change the methods of presence in institutions of children and tutors.
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