In today’s
, most
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individuals prefer to marry and have kids at the
of thirty
of a young
.
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totally depends on the person’s preferences, circumstances and mindset. I reckon
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development has more advantages because
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the
of thirties, you are enough mature to tackle and afford all the expenses of your family.
Marrying at an early
is risky because
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that
, we have a childish mentality
not enough experience and knowledge about marriage life and its responsibilities.
,
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the wrong partner
increasesCorrect subject-verb agreement
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and will lead to marital distress.
, we are more focused on our career and future goals at a young
. That’s why, we might have to give up some of
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ambitions, dreams and
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. So, managing both things
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problematic in
case.
, in our thirties, we have settled
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our jobs or businesses because of
, we have clear direction and enough knowledge to choose what kind of person we need and what we want our marriage to look like. We can see the world in the bigger picture and
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decisions
our preferences and choices. At that
, we are
enough mature and know how to
our children so that, they become role
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for other’s people in future.
,when we are in a position of financially stable
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we can provide better facilities, lifestyle and life standards to our upcoming family.
, I believe that when a person is financially independent and successful in their life
it’s the right
to marry someone. Marriage is a huge responsibility and it’s our foremost duty to fulfil all the requirements and do
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for our family to create memories and a healthy environment.