Many people nowadays tend to marry and have children in their thirties rather than at a younger age. Is this a positive or negative development?

In today’s

time

, most

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individuals prefer to marry and have kids at the

age

of thirty

instead

of a young

age

.

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totally depends on the person’s preferences, circumstances and mindset. I reckon

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this

development has more advantages because

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the

age

of thirties, you are enough mature to tackle and afford all the expenses of your family. Marrying at an early

age

is risky because

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that

time

, we have a childish mentality

along with

not enough experience and knowledge about marriage life and its responsibilities.

Therefore

,

chances

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to choose

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of choosing

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the wrong partner

increases

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and will lead to marital distress.

Moreover

, we are more focused on our career and future goals at a young

age

. That’s why, we might have to give up some of

ours

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ambitions, dreams and

aspiration

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. So, managing both things

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problematic in

this

case.

However

, in our thirties, we have settled

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our jobs or businesses because of

this

, we have clear direction and enough knowledge to choose what kind of person we need and what we want our marriage to look like. We can see the world in the bigger picture and

take

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decisions

according to

our preferences and choices. At that

time

, we are

also

enough mature and know how to

upbring

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our children so that, they become role

model

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for other’s people in future.

Also

,when we are in a position of financially stable

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we can provide better facilities, lifestyle and life standards to our upcoming family.

To conclude

, I believe that when a person is financially independent and successful in their life

then

it’s the right

time

to marry someone. Marriage is a huge responsibility and it’s our foremost duty to fulfil all the requirements and do

best

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for our family to create memories and a healthy environment.