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you work for an international company and need to take some time off work to celebrate a family event.write a letter to your manager.In your letter .give details of the family event and why it is important you attend .Say how much time you will need away from the office. .suggest how your work could be covered while your away .

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
 letter requesting you to take a vacation for a few days.Because I want to join my family function. To start with,I have been working in
this
 company for the
last
 5 years.Yesterday,I received a call which was made by my father.The call was special for me because my parents informed me.They are celebrating their wedding anniversary in the party hall and want to invite our friends and relatives.My father has been living in Canada for the
last
 6 years .So,I think that
this
 is the first marriage anniversary ,he is here.
That is
 why,it is essential for us.
Furthermore
,I would like to spend 15 days with them
as well as
 I will get a chance to meet my college friends after leaving college.I want to organize everything by myself.So,I have to go before the party.I would prefer to visit the villa which is very famous in my city.I want to get a break from my hectic schedule.
Moreover
,
while
, I would be away from the office.I will handle my job online.Definitely,I would finish my office tasks from home.My holidays will not affect the company's performance or company progress.I will complete my work on time. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you Yours sincerely, Gagandeep Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear [Manager's Name]
  • I am writing to inform you
  • I would like to request
  • my presence is required
  • celebrate an important family event
  • a significant milestone
  • attendance at this event is crucial
  • I understand the importance of my role
  • I kindly request
  • leave of absence
  • for a period of
  • I will be happy to assist
  • delegate my tasks
  • to ensure a smooth transition
  • handover my responsibilities
  • I apologize for any inconvenience
  • I appreciate your understanding
  • Thank you for your attention to this matter
  • Sincerely
  • [Your Name]
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