It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Do the advantages of having a year off outweigh the disadvantages?

A year break after graduating from school before going to university has increased lately.

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there will be some spaces for students to reflect and think deeply before choosing the next path of their life,

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can be a boomerang so they

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on laziness. I believe that the advantages partially outweigh the disadvantages.

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is an artificial concept

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a space to think will be pivotal. The majority of

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of subjects,

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to opt the next major they want to dive

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the desire of chemistry student is

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for his bachelor , so he will need much more time to adjust his basic knowledge before entering university.

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, sometimes youngsters are not

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and just play around which can be addictive. To have a deep understanding

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knowledge, repetition is

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key.

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, consuming free time

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whole year, their academic memory can be gone.

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formula is complex and if we forget to add one variable we can ruin the whole answer.

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should not be

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their time.

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, nowadays, a

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break is popular among students

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even though

it can be detrimental or

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beneficial

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on how they treat it. Parents need to observe and accompany their child so

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will be in the right way.