Online shopping has gained immense popularity in recent years, challenging the traditional brick-and-mortar stores. Examine the advantages and disadvantages of both methods of shopping and give your opinion.

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There is no denying the fact that online shopping invaded the world recently.
While
it is a commonly held belief that shopping online is more common and popular in the current time. There is
also
an argument that
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a lot of
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people prefer onsite shopping.
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essay will analyse
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topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On
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hand, shopping online makes
people
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lives much easier and
its
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save
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thier
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them
time.
In other words
, recently, you can order
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you need and you will receive it at your location in hours, days or weeks.
In addition
, some brands have
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been
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started to provide
the
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customers
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costumers
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customers
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phone
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application
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to help them
to
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oreder
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order
from home.
For example
, what
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happened
happens
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Covid
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quarantine was no one
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to exit
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home, so, everyone had to order what
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want
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using online applications.
On the other hand
, onsite shopping gives you the
opportunitis
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opportunity
to touch and try what you are looking for. It is
also
possible to say that
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helps you to know the material and quality of the order.
Moreover
, you can try it and see if it is
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suitable
for you or not. For
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instance
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shop
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they
are usually provide
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a
measurment
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measurement
room inside the place to let the
costumer
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confirm the size before he
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. In conclusion, there are no easy
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to
this
question.
However
, I tend to believe that people can choose online or onsite
shoppins
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shopping
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on their free time and how much they trust the material.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Brick-and-mortar
  • Tactile
  • Fraud
  • Geographical limitations
  • Price comparisons
  • Instant gratification
  • Personalized service
  • Social experience
  • Hybrid models
  • Click and collect
  • Impulse buying
  • Physical examination
  • E-commerce
  • Consumer behavior
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