The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1995, 2005, and 2015. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illustrates
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illustrate
degrees
granted in the year 1995, 2005 and 2015 at the National University in the fields of computer
science
, medicine
, business and law
. The values are expressed in percentages.
Overall
, the majority of degrees
were given in the field of computer
science
throught
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through
whereas
the proportion of law related
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law-related
degrees
counted for the least. Graduations in medicine
despite little fluctuations, remained constant overall
.
In 1995, 30 per cent
of the degrees
were given to both computer
science
and business, the graduation in law
and medicine
held 15 and 25 per cent
of the degrees
granted, respectively. In the following decade, the proportion of degrees
given in computer
science
experienced a 10 per cent
rise, whereas
buisness
graduations fell by the same value. Correct your spelling
business
Degrees
granted in the filed
of Correct your spelling
field
medicine
saw a rise by
5 per Change preposition
of
cent
than
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in
previous
decade and Correct article usage
the previous
law
exprienced
a fall Correct your spelling
experienced
by
5 per Change preposition
of
cent
than earlier.
45 per cent
of the degrees
were granted in the field of medicine
in 2015, followed by medicine
which held 25 per cent
of the total distributions. Business and law
shared 15 per cent
of the remaining degrees
, respectively.Submitted by mrigankingley2099 on
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