The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs illustrate the average proportions of

sodium

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, saturated fats and added sugars, which can be harmful to the body if eaten too much, in standard meals consumed in a particular country.

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dinner, the ratio of

sodium

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and saturated fat is the highest, 43% and 37% respectively, which is considerably more than that in lunch (29% and 26%).

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, the largest portion of added sugar taken in a

day

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appears in snacks, reaching 42%, which is almost double the amount of that contained in dinner (23%). The percentages of these three types of nutrients in breakfast are universally the lowest among the four meals of the

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, 14% 16% 16% each,

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the amount of

sodium

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in snacks is equally the smallest (14%), much less than that added in lunch (29%), taking up the second place of the count of

sodium

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intake during a

day

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according to

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the charts, it is obvious that there is more

sodium

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and saturated fat consumed at dinner and more added sugar consumed in snacks, than in any other meal during the

day

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, all of these nutrients are least consumed in breakfast.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, day with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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