The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of utilizing animal hides in the production of
leather
goods.
In total, there are eleven distinct steps involved in Use synonyms
this
process, commencing with the initial drying of the animal Linking Words
skin
and concluding with the production of Use synonyms
leather
items.
The initial step, as shown in the diagram, involves salting and sun-drying the animal hide to preserve it. Once the Use synonyms
leather
has been properly dried, it is transported to the factory via a lorry. Upon reaching the factory, the Use synonyms
skin
undergoes a thorough washing in a vat containing water and lime to eliminate salt and dirt. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the washed Linking Words
skin
is soaked in lime to remove any protein and fat residues. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, the soaked Linking Words
skin
is flattened using a roller to create a smooth surface. The flattened Use synonyms
skin
is Use synonyms
then
immersed in Tannin, a mixture of water and vegetable matter, to prevent decay and enhance preservation. Upon completion of Linking Words
this
stage, the treated Linking Words
skin
is polished to achieve a glossy finish. Use synonyms
Finally
, the polished Linking Words
leather
is transported to a factory where it is used in the manufacturing of various Use synonyms
leather
products, including shoes, bags, and balls.Use synonyms
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