The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of utilizing animal hides in the production of
leather
goods.
In total, there are eleven distinct steps involved in this
process, commencing with the initial drying of the animal skin
and concluding with the production of leather
items.
The initial step, as shown in the diagram, involves salting and sun-drying the animal hide to preserve it. Once the leather
has been properly dried, it is transported to the factory via a lorry. Upon reaching the factory, the skin
undergoes a thorough washing in a vat containing water and lime to eliminate salt and dirt. Subsequently
, the washed skin
is soaked in lime to remove any protein and fat residues. Following
this
, the soaked skin
is flattened using a roller to create a smooth surface. The flattened skin
is then
immersed in Tannin, a mixture of water and vegetable matter, to prevent decay and enhance preservation. Upon completion of this
stage, the treated skin
is polished to achieve a glossy finish. Finally
, the polished leather
is transported to a factory where it is used in the manufacturing of various leather
products, including shoes, bags, and balls.Submitted by jacob.nazaradeh on
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