Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vetgetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it good idea, but some oppose it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, some
countries
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have
problem
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problems

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of
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with

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season
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the season

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, so they need the vehicles to
move
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fruit and vegetables to them. The best
transport
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for some people
think
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thinks

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is
aircralf
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aircraft

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,
while
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others think it
need
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needs

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to oppose.
this
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statement will show that using
aircraft
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is
the
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a

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good idea when
countries
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are out of season and will give
main
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the main

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reasons
how
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for how

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this
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statement will be achieved. On the one hand, people consider
to oppose
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opposing

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aircraf
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aircraft

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to
move
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food
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to their
countries
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, because they think these
action
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actions

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can decrease the
agritural
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agricultural

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and
also
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make them depend on finance in
others
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other

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countries
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.
Moreover
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, these action shows that
this
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country
do
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does

The plural verb do not does not appear to agree with the singular subject this country. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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not
have
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have to

It appears that the verb develop should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.

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develop
Wrong verb form
developed

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of
financial
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finances

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in planting
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to plant

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and selling
food
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when they have
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a prolem

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prolem
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problem
problems

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of
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with

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weather
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the weather

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. On the other
hands
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hand

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, some individuals think it is a good idea, because these can make their communication have a good relationship with other areas.
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Also
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Also,

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these action
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this action
these actions

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can solve to lack of fruit and vegetables in
countries
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.
Although
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using
aircraft
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have much
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has a lot of

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money to pay,
this
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vehicles
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vehicle

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is the fastest
transport
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to
move
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food
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to
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apply

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anywhere
fastly
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quickly

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. In
m
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my

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opinion,
aircraft
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have been increasingly used to
transport
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food
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to some
countries
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because
this
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is the fastest
transport
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so they can be relieved by other
countries
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.
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Also
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this vehicle
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these vehicles

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do not have
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a crack
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crack
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cracks

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of
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in

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traffic
jam
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jams

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so
this
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is the best way of choosing
aircraft
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to
move
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thier
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their

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food
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in
countries
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. In conclusion, fruit
ang
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and

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vegetables are very
neccessary
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necessary

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for people
on
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in

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season
where
Correct word choice
who

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have
problem
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problems

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of
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with

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weather
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the weather

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and can not
product
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produce

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something
eslse
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else

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in
this
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, so
the
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a

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good idea to solve
this
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problem is
using
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to use

Using doesn’t seem to work here.

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fast
transport
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to
countries
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which need
the
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apply

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relief.

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