Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vetgetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it good idea, but some oppose it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some
countries
have
problem
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problems
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of
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with
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season
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the season
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, so they need the vehicles to
move
fruit and vegetables to them. The best
transport
for some people
think
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thinks
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is
aircralf
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aircraft
,
while
others think it
need
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needs
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to oppose.
this
statement will show that using
aircraft
is
the
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a
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good idea when
countries
are out of season and will give
main
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the main
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reasons
how
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for how
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this
statement will be achieved. On the one hand, people consider
to oppose
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opposing
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aircraf
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aircraft
to
move
food
to their
countries
, because they think these
action
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actions
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can decrease the
agritural
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agricultural
and
also
make them depend on finance in
others
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other
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countries
.
Moreover
, these action shows that
this
country
do
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does
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not
have
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have to
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develop
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developed
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of
financial
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finances
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in planting
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to plant
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and selling
food
when they have
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a prolem
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prolem
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problem
problems
of
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with
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weather
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the weather
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. On the other
hands
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hand
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, some individuals think it is a good idea, because these can make their communication have a good relationship with other areas.
Also
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these action
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this action
these actions
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can solve to lack of fruit and vegetables in
countries
.
Although
using
aircraft
have much
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has a lot of
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money to pay,
this
vehicles
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vehicle
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is the fastest
transport
to
move
food
to
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apply
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anywhere
fastly
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quickly
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. In
m
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my
opinion,
aircraft
have been increasingly used to
transport
food
to some
countries
because
this
is the fastest
transport
so they can be relieved by other
countries
.
Also
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this vehicle
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these vehicles
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do not have
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a crack
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crack
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cracks
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of
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in
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traffic
jam
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jams
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so
this
is the best way of choosing
aircraft
to
move
thier
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their
food
in
countries
. In conclusion, fruit
ang
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and
vegetables are very
neccessary
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necessary
for people
on
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in
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season
where
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who
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have
problem
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problems
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of
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with
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weather
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the weather
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and can not
product
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produce
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something
eslse
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else
in
this
, so
the
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a
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good idea to solve
this
problem is
using
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to use
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fast
transport
to
countries
which need
the
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apply
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relief.
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