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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » write about the action you want the manager to take Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I visited your restaurant on
11 th
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11th
 May with my family to celebrate my sister’s birthday. We usually enjoy your food but
this
 time it was disappointing, it ruined our celebration spirit. I would like you to take the necessary steps to improve the food quality in order to retain your reputation. I often visit your restaurant
due to
 hygiene, staff behaviour and
above all
 the food quality. But
last
 time I had my table booked in advance
however
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, it was allocated to someone else, which is not acceptable as it hurts
customer's
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the customer's
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 faith in your service.
Moreover
, the meal was less than I ordered. The first dish was tasteless and salty. We mentioned that the meat was undercooked but no comment or apology was made at the time. And
also
 we discovered some
blondy
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blond
 hairs in
salad
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the salad
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 which closed our appetite. I am
regular
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a regular
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 customer of your restaurant and if
this
 is what you are going to continue in the future,
then
 I will have to find a different place for family occasions. I hope you will consider the points I have raised very carefully and hope that you understand me correctly. Yours faithfully, Durdona
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