Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season some people consider it a good ide,but some people oppose it Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some
people
think
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use of aeroplanes to transport fruit and
vegetable
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vegetables
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.
While
some
people
argue that it would
b
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be
unreasonable to carry them. I believe that that
airtransport
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transport
generally has more benefits on several levels.
On the other hand
,
people
in that
countrycan
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country can
country
enjoy
fruits
that their country doesn'
t
have
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doesn'
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t
have a
reaso
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reason
or conditions aren'
t
suitable for growing
such
fruit.
Air
transportation and because
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the shelf life
or
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of
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fruits
and
vegetables
is
also
poor. They
not
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quickly
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. So
this
requirs
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requires
some quick means to transport it from
ae
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a
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country to another.
For example
, the average
temperture
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temperature
in South America isn'
t
favourable for growing
fruits
and
vegetables
, so most of these products are usually imported from North America.
People
rely entirely on North America for a wide variety of
fruits
and
vegetbles
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vegetables
. Once these
fruits
and
vegetables
are exported , their prices are likely to increase by 40 to 50
percent
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due to
air
freight and associated taxes between the two
country
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countries
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.
Therefore
, only a few
people
can afford to buy
such
fruit
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fruits
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and
vegetables
. Advantageous as the airline
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, the airline itself,
require
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tonnes of fuel like coal, oil,
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to activate the engines.
Therefore
,
this
is the main reason why many
people
reject using aircraft as a means of transportation regardless of its favourable attributes.
A research
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at the
environmental institute
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in California shows that 27% of the carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere, affecting the
air
quality of numerous countries
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what
airline
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airlines
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are responsible for.
This
immense amount of toxic chemical substances emitted into the
air
is what needs to be
concerned
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more than famine and crop losses. In short, it seems to me that it would be better to invest and
further
develop food transportation services by
air
for
people
's daily necessities.
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