Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are of season. some pp consider it good idea, but some pp oppose it. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, some land
have
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problems with the season, so they need
the
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vehicles to act
fruit
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as fruit
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and vegetables to them. The best shipping for some people
thinks
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is aircraft,
while
others think it needs to
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.
this
statement will show that using airliner is a good idea when land
are
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out of season and will give the main reasons for how
this
statement will be achieved. On the one hand, people consider opposing aircraft to
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fare to their community, because they think these actions can decrease the agricultural and
also
make them depend on finance in other public.
Moreover
, these action shows that
this
country does not have to
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of
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finances to plant and
selling
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bread when they have problem with the weather.
On the other hand
, some individuals think it is a good idea
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because
these
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can make their communication have a good relationship with other areas.
Also
,
this
action can solve to lack of fruit and vegetables in
community
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.
Although
using
airliner
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an airliner
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has a lot of money to pay,
this
vehicle is the fastest transportation to act foodstuff anywhere quickly. In my opinion,
jet
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have been increasingly used to
transportation
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feed to some
society
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because
this
is the fastest shipment so they can be relieved by
other state
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.
Also
, these vehicles do not have cracks in traffic jams so
this
is the best way of choosing
chopper
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a chopper
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to act their meal in
state
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the state
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.
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