Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of reason. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people appose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many keen on the idea that using if they that
people
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are
aircraft
to carry fruit
and vegetables overseas or in some place can not be done , while
some people
have an opinion it is not a good idea. This
writer will give opinion
and show you what is the best option for you to choose . On the one hand, vehicles that you Correct pronoun usage
your opinion
use
for many advantages . Firstly
it enables consumers to gain a variety of fresh produce throughout the year. This
aircraft
lead
you to balance Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
such
as a lot of fruit
that your health should be increased a lot.Furthermore
, flying vehicles can increase the economies of developing countries. So that we can see that aircraft
have a positive effect to
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on
people
. On the other hand
, citizens of our transport have idea that it will have a negative effect o
environment impact, Correct your spelling
on
also
the emissions by air pollution so that i will lead to people
life more worse . Moreover
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,
use
a plane o
move Change preposition
to
fruit
, the higher percentageChange preposition
of
fruit
will be rotten and people
could get poison after ate
it. Change the form of the verb
eating
Also
if people
use
the plane to move vegetables , the money that people
paid
for it will be much higher Wrong verb form
pay
while
other transport could cost less money to buy. In my view, the decision to use
aircraft
to transport fruit
and vegetables should be better because that will increase
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improve
people
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people's
life
a lot , help them to know and taste new flavours ,Fix the agreement mistake
lives
Correct word choice
and
also
make the economies of developing countries higher. In conclusion, using aircraft
should strike and balance between ensuring access to fresh produces
for all Correct subject-verb agreement
produce
people
and for the
better environment.Correct article usage
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion