Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of reason. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people appose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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people
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are
aircraft
to carry Use synonyms
fruit
and vegetables overseas or in some place can not be done , Use synonyms
while
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people
have an opinion it is not a good idea. Use synonyms
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opinion
and show you what is the best option for you to choose . On the one hand, vehicles that you Correct pronoun usage
your opinion
use
for many advantages . Use synonyms
Firstly
it enables consumers to gain a variety of fresh produce throughout the year. Linking Words
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aircraft
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lead
you to balance Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
such
as a lot of Linking Words
fruit
that your health should be increased a lot.Use synonyms
Furthermore
, flying vehicles can increase the economies of developing countries. So that we can see that Linking Words
aircraft
have a positive effect Use synonyms
to
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on
people
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, citizens of our transport have idea that it will have a negative effect Linking Words
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environment impact, Correct your spelling
on
also
the emissions by air pollution so that i will lead to Linking Words
people
life more worse . Use synonyms
Moreover
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,
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to
fruit
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of
fruit
will be rotten and Use synonyms
people
could get poison after Use synonyms
ate
it. Change the form of the verb
eating
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people
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use
the plane to move vegetables , the money that Use synonyms
people
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paid
for it will be much higher Wrong verb form
pay
while
other transport could cost less money to buy. In my view, the decision to Linking Words
use
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aircraft
to transport Use synonyms
fruit
and vegetables should be better because that will Use synonyms
increase
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improve
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people
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people's
life
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lives
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and
also
make the economies of developing countries higher. In conclusion, using Linking Words
aircraft
should strike and balance between ensuring access to fresh Use synonyms
produces
for all Correct subject-verb agreement
produce
people
and for Use synonyms
the
better environment.Correct article usage
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion