Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain concerned parties today contend that parents are the best tutors for their children to teach them how to be

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good human

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in public,

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others believe these skills should be taught at

school

.

While

it is suggested by some individuals that

school

is the best place to teach them the ways of acting in social communities, I strongly agree with those who give the credit to parents. On the one hand, some people justifiably argue that fathers and mothers should take the responsibility of teaching

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lessons to their teenagers. It's because they

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believe that parents have a great potential to affect their own children, they know them well so they can create the best methods

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them. In my personal experience, my younger sister did everything that my father taught her

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he used attractive ways teaching her about how to behave in society.

On the other hand

, another group of people claim that learning communities like schools are the best choices. They insist that students find the

school

as a place for doing mandatory stuff, so they will accept everything the faculty tells them.

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, I do not find

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argument convincing as getting orders from teachers and

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not make any sense,

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means

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it can have bad effects on the student's future, like

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others' ideas in different subjects and

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their own notions and behave in a wrong way in communities

To conclude

, in my view, fathers and mothers are the best tutors in social life skills. They build the most appropriate methods of teaching by considering their personality.

Moreover

, regulating children by presenting some unsuitable ways could result in bad mental

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, not helping them to cope with social life.