You recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference. In your letter, say: what the conference is about how you know about the conference explain to him/her why it is important that you attend this conference You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mathew,
I am writing
this
letter to seek your approval for attending a conference
which will be helpful for my overall
development.
This
meeting provides knowledge about distinct tools for how to scale up your business and become an invaluable individual in the office. Moreover
, this
conference
going to teach various styles of giving perfect presentations in front of valuable clients.
Yesterday, I came across this
advertisement while
I was scrolling through my Instagram reels. At first glance, it intrigues my interest due to
the knowledge being offered at this
conference
. In addition
, one of my former colleagues shared the link to the same advertisement which provided confirmation to me regarding the authenticity of this
meeting. Thus
, it can be a career-changing moment for me.
I would be preferred by me to attend this
conference
because the lessons being offered here will help me be an excellent communicator while
giving a presentation. So, I am seeking your approval to grant me a one-day leave to be a part of this
meeting.
Looking forward to your consideration in this
matter.
Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence, ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next by using linking words or phrases.
task achievement
Be mindful of minor grammatical errors and ensure consistent verb tense usage to improve task response.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses all parts of the task, providing clear details about the conference, how the writer learned about it, and why it is important.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for writing to a manager, which suits the purpose of the task well.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with an appropriate greeting and closing.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph deals with a single idea, contributing to the overall clarity of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite