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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it is a good idea, some are not. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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With modern technology, air transport has been increasingly used to provide agricultural products to many different countries where these goods are hard to grow or it is in an inappropriate season.
As a consequence
, there is an argument about whether it is good to
use
 an aeroplane to bring these items from
place
 to
place
 or
use
 another form of transportation to do it.
This
 essay will discuss both opinions and give the reason why the latter statement is better. First thing
first,
it needs to be noted that transferring goods from country to country by plane is really costly and not sufficient when needed to deal with heavy
things
, compared with a seaway
that is
 much cheaper and more efficient because it can tolerate lots of products and heavy shipments.
For example
, nowadays we still
use
 the waterway to ship merchandise from a
place
 because it is more convenient and more affordable than the air highway.
However
, it
also
 needs to be known that Airway Express is faster and the risk of damaging objects in transit is much lesser than using a ship and train.
However
, as it was said above the cost to do
that is
 way too high in comparison with the benefits it gives and is it better to only
use
this
 route of transportation in an emergency situation.
Also
, other ways of shipping products from
place
 to
place
 are advancing over time,
due to
 that, the agricultural units are still fresh after a long journey and the money for it is lower and lower. So, it can be fair to say that exporting these
things
 from
place
 to
place
 is unnecessary.
Thus
, using an air highway to deliver goods is not sufficient and high-cost compared to other ways of transmitting
things
.
Hence
, it is still more beneficial to
use
 other kinds of ways to ship
things
 than planes.
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