some people think that a sense of competion in children should be encouraged while others think cooperation both views and give opinio

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today's

children

. talking about

competition

some people say it is good to encourage

children

rather than inculcate

cooperation

in young minds to be successful in adulthood as some folks suggest.

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essay will include both of these notions and the opinion on the same. to embark, one of the paramount

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the sense of

competition

in

children

would bring up their determination and encourage them to succeed in future. as some humans think that the cutthroat

competition

can make an individual realise the value of it.

this

is

due to

the fact that during the time of contesting with their friends or other people in the same age group, people learn many valuable lessons. sportsmanship is one of the greatest qualities that

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have seen personally being indulged in individuals. and the tendency to adjust and think for the betterment of one own is

also

learnted

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learnt

in my opinion, a sense of

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competition

can teach many essential lessons in youngsters for life. despite

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the innumerable benefits of

competition

among

childreen

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children

, few citizens believe that

cooperation

taught to the kids is far more useful to

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a good adult.

this

means that teaching

co-operation

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cooperation

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in them can make their life even more pleasant as a grownup. juveniles who are taught

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this

can adjust to any group and can

also

understand the needs of others.

children

learning

cooperation

tend to perseve tolerance and respect for others which is a learning for a lifetime. in

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it is prominent that both

competition

and

cooperation

are key for a child as he grows they will definitely teach them lessons and eventually make them a proud human. it is the wish of their guardians to groom their child.