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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
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The proffered line chart provides information about how many foreigners went to a particular Caribbean
island
 from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it is readily noticeable that there was an increase in the number of
visitors
 staying on cruise ships and on islands. Looking at the chart,
visitors
 who came to the
island
 experienced a drastic growth in totals. At the beginning of the
period
, it recorded one
million
visitors
, and the figure showed dramatic progress in its rise, accounting for 2.5
million
people
.
Furthermore
, there was a slight increase in the subsequent year, the
trend
 was relatively stable in 2016. Interestingly, it peaked at 3.5
million
visitors
at the end
 of the
period
. In detail,
visitors
 who stayed at ships and resided on the
island
 made up around 0.2 and 0.7
million
people
 respectively in 2010, the figure of
people
 who stayed on the
island
 skyrocketed in 2012 and peaked at 2
million
visitors
 in 2017;
however
, there was a fluctuation
trend
 between 2010 and 2012. On the other side, the figure of
people
 who stayed on cruise ships levelled off between the
period
 of 2010 and 2013 and the
period
of
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2013 and 2015, its steady growth was shown in 2013, and it comprised
at
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1.5
visitors
.
Nevertheless
, the
trend
 showed a fluctuation
trend
 in recent years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, period, million, people, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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