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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
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The proffered line chart provides information about how many foreigners went to a particular Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, it is readily noticeable that there was an increase in the number of
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships and on islands. Looking at the chart,
visitors
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 who came to the
island
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 experienced a drastic growth in totals. At the beginning of the
period
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, it recorded one
million
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visitors
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, and the figure showed dramatic progress in its rise, accounting for 2.5
million
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people
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.
Furthermore
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, there was a slight increase in the subsequent year, the
trend
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 was relatively stable in 2016. Interestingly, it peaked at 3.5
million
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visitors
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at the end
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 of the
period
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. In detail,
visitors
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 who stayed at ships and resided on the
island
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 made up around 0.2 and 0.7
million
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people
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 respectively in 2010, the figure of
people
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 who stayed on the
island
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 skyrocketed in 2012 and peaked at 2
million
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visitors
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 in 2017;
however
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, there was a fluctuation
trend
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 between 2010 and 2012. On the other side, the figure of
people
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 who stayed on cruise ships levelled off between the
period
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 of 2010 and 2013 and the
period
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of
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2013 and 2015, its steady growth was shown in 2013, and it comprised
at
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1.5
visitors
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.
Nevertheless
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, the
trend
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 showed a fluctuation
trend
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 in recent years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors, period, million, people, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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