A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give contact details for when you are away •give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,
Ayesha,
I am writing a letter to request you to look after my home during
holidays
.
Before I Correct article usage
the holidays
had been deciding
to go outside the city I was very bewildered Wrong verb form
decided
that
who Change preposition
about
will
take care Wrong verb form
would
my
home. Change preposition
of my
Besides
this
, I was worried about my cat because I cannot
take her with me. Suddenly I did remember that you are the one who can take care Wrong verb form
could not
household
chores. I can blindly trust Change preposition
of household
on
you so you will take care Change preposition
apply
my
responsibilities very well.
I am giving you my contact details so you can in touch Change preposition
of my
me
all Change preposition
with me
time
. My WhatsApp number is Correct article usage
the time
all time
available and it's easy Rephrase
always
that
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for
I
would see my cat Correct pronoun usage
me
with
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via
Furthermore
, I want to inform the dearest pet she eats too much so be careful to give more than one packet of biscuits. Moreover
, the Charwoman comes at 10 am in the morning so you will have to clean all
the house carefully. I Correct determiner usage
apply
am satisfy
with your potential Change the verb form
am satisfied
that
you will do all the Correct word choice
and that
task
well.
I am looking forward to hearing Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
you
soon.
Best Regards,Change preposition
from you
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.