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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line graph below displays the wheat exports between 1985 and 1990 in
Australia
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,Canada and
European
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the European
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 community.The unit is measured in
millions
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millions of
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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,it is evident that there was an upward trend in sales
of
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in
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 all countries, with
Australia
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 being an exception.
To begin
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 with, In 1985,Canada stood at almost 20
million
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tonnes
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 being the highest among all countries
while
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Australia
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 was the least.The figure for
export
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exports
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 in Canada fluctuated and increased rapidly to 25
million
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tonnes
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 hitting the peak of the graph before there was a plunge in 1989,afterwards the value was at 18 which was the second highest in 1990.
Furthermore
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,
Australia
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 saw a slight increase in 1986 before there was a downward trend to 12
million
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tonnes
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 making it the lowest amongst all countries in 1990.
However
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,
although
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 there was a dip in the rate of
europe
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Europe
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 to 14,
this
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 was followed by a sudden rise surpassing
Australia
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 between 1986 and 1987 and by the end of the period,it was at 21
million
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tonnes
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 making it the highest exchange in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, tonnes, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wheat exports
  • trend
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • fluctuations
  • periods of stability
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • similarities
  • differences
  • key points
  • potential reasons
  • climatic conditions
  • agricultural policies
  • market demand
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