You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Explain the important -Apologize for the situation -Suggest a new arrangement

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Deae

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Dear

Smith , I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention I am really glad all things work out with you as we planned

for

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come to visit

Englend

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England

and I was enthusiastic unfortunately I am going to cancel

this

plane for a

reson

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reason

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, I

aplogize

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apologise

to postpone

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for postponing

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my visit to next

month

due to

my mother she

is do

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not feel very well and

need

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care of her as I older daughter I will

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take her for a

month

moreover

this

month

my friend

get

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marriend

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married

I would like to attend the wedding as she is my best friend her marriage will be on 13 of October. Hopefully, I am going to visit England next

month

already

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arrenged

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arranged

my schedule with my work and family

also

I hope my mother

get

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well soon. I am really looking forward to seeing you. Yours sincerely ,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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149 words

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