Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Like how there are two sides to a coin, the debate on whether young
people
who have transitioned into the adult phase of life, must stay or leave their hometown
, is also
two-sided. While
some believe that it's better to stay in one's hometown
, I unequivocally agree that moving out would help in character development.
On the one hand, adults
must stay in their hometown
to keep in touch with their roots. This
is because, for a lot of people
, their hometown
is a part of their cultural identity. As a result
, moving to a new place could lead to loss of cultural identity which could consequently
result in mental health issues such
as anxiety and depression. Moreover
, young adults
could also
face a lot of pressure in a new environment and in certain circumstances, adapting to a new place could be a challenge. For example
, a study published by the University of Texas concluded that 40% of adults
who have moved to new areas have been prescribed with
anxiety medications Change preposition
apply
due to
feeling overwhelmed all the time.
On the other hand
, I believe moving out of one's hometown
is a good change for a number of reasons. Firstly
, it makes people
come out of their comfort zone which fosters personal growth. Secondly
, they are made to rely on themselves which teaches young adults
certain responsibilities. For example
, only when I moved to Banglore did I learn how to be financially responsible. Until then
, my parents took care of all my finances. Lastly
, experiencing different cultures help people
understand the world better and helps them develop into a socially conscious person.
In conclusion, although
there are drawbacks such
as suffering from mental health issues while
moving to a new place, I believe that the advantages of moving out outweigh the disadvantages. The major benefits include experiencing a new culture and personal growth.Submitted by vani13padmakumar on
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