:In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In
this
current time, online shopping is overtaking the stores
In some countries. Whether it is a positive or negative change, it is negative mostly. Both will be discussed in this
essay.
Firstly
, People think it is a positive change because ordering products without going to the stores
is more convenient to
them. It doesn't require Change preposition
for
to
drive Correct pronoun usage
you to
car
and go to Add an article
a car
the car
stores
to shop. Personally
I don't agree with that much. Add a comma
Personally,
While
it is easier, it is not like seeing the actual product in person and see
if it fits the person. It is Wrong verb form
seeing
also
easy to get scammed and even if sellers are trust worthy
, there are going to be mistakes in orders sometimes. If someone Correct your spelling
trustworthy
bought
Wrong verb form
buys
clothes
from online shopping, it is not always grantee that piece of clothe
, will Change the verb form
clothing
fits
Change the verb form
fit
you
even for Correct pronoun usage
them
indivisuals
who know their sizes.
Correct your spelling
individuals
On the other hand
, It is negative for some people because,
going to shop and Remove the comma
apply
see
products by themselves is better which I personally agreeWrong verb form
seeing
.
Going and Change preposition
with.
see
products Wrong verb form
seeing
instead
of images online, is much better and
Correct word choice
than
decided
if it is really worth buying. Especially when it comes to Wrong verb form
deciding
clothes
. For example
, in clothes
shops, there is a room for changing clothes
or in electronics shops, there is a section where there are phones and laptops for testing.
In short, I think online shopping replacing stores
is a negative thing. It's not ideal
choice to shopAdd an article
the ideal
an ideal
,
Change preposition
for, While
While
there are some positive points, It comes with its negatives along with
Change preposition
apply
it
.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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