The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.
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The comparison of the two maps reveals the alterations from rural areas to infrastructural regions. Modernisation took place in Westley between 1815 and the present day.
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, the town witnessed significant changes as the suburban area has become a developed modern area.
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, in 1815 there was a bridge over the River Twine. Nowadays, there are railways, stretching along the river from South to North and replacing fields. On the Nort, nearest to the Tinton village the Lentone Hotel and the Red Lion were erected. Crossing the road towards the south, the Lentone woods close to Lenton Lake have been chopped down, giving way to infrastructure. The Lentone Housing Estate is surrounded by entertainment
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as a sports centre, museum and west shopping centre.
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, in the south of Westley were numerous houses, which had been knocked down, whilst now there was build up a Town hall adjusted by the market square. Towards the west of the Market Square, there is located a cinema within walking distance
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the road, which leads to the shopping, business and residential areas towards the south.
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