Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter - say what you like about the uniform - explain what you don’t you like about the uniform - suggest how the uniform can be improved

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Dear Sumit, Hope you are doing well. I am writing
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mail to express my appreciation for our new agenda because all of our team members, including me appreciate it. The main reason to like is the contrast of the colours red and black
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of white is not only beneficial for better representation but
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for less dirty by the end of the day.
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, there should be no worry of any stain on the t-shirts, namely ink or drink. 50% of
team
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ink stain issue
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working.
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, there are a few things which should be considered serious
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as the fabric of trousers is not comfortable. To explain
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, the majority of employees complained about skin rashes
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the thickness of the fabric.
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, a few co-workers, especially healthy ones want to exchange them owing to the rigid collar which causes rashes
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pain.
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, it can be solved by using appropriate methods like using fewer hard collars,
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, it should be adjustable.
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, the workers can adjust
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their preferences.
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, we can arrange a survey to take advice from team members which could be helpful in getting rid of
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issue. At
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, thanks for your help and I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Gurpinder Kaur

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduced
  • appreciation
  • pleasing
  • professional image
  • elegant
  • sophistication
  • professionalism
  • high quality
  • appearance
  • comfort
  • modern
  • stylish
  • tailored
  • sleek lines
  • polished
  • discomfort
  • relaxed
  • adjustable
  • beneficial
  • aesthetics
  • commitment
  • valued
  • enhance
  • modifications
  • impression
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