The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the number of men in Yamen and Italy in 2000 and the prediction for 2050.
Overall
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, we can observe
the
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that
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life between 15 to 59
years
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had the highest percentage more than any age.
While
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the life from 0 to 14 was the lowest one.
According to
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the shapes, there was a great difference between numbers in Yemen. In 2000, the rate of people in 15 to 59
years
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was 46.3% but in 2050 the percentage increased rapidly to 57.3%.
However
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, the age from 0 to 14 was 50% in 2000
then
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decreased dramatically to 37%.
About
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For about
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60
years
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it had slightly changed only. In Italy, the rate was different between the era. The age from 0 to 14
years
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was decreased sharply from 14.3% to 11.5%.
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, the group 15 to 59 will go down from 61.6% to 47.2% in 2050.
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, the number of people aged 60
years
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rose suddenly from 24.1% to 42.3% and that was a high change in Italy period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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