Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that,
truth
is like the sun
people
can shut it out for a time but it ain't going away. As a human individuals
are involves
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with
people
by different
relationships
like
,
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friends ,partners, cousins and so on . The
relationship
in
folks
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Life plays
an
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vital role
due to
that. It
is always consider
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that in every
relationship
people
should always speak
truth
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the truth
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to each other.
Let
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Let's
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discuss the topic in the upcoming paragraphs To dive
in to
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the topic , I partly agree with the statement
as
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that
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being honest in
the
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a
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relationship
always
create
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creates
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the more stronger bonds between the masses.
Further
, when
people
speak
truth
in the
relationships
it will help them to feel free and
do
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not
getting involve
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get involved
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them
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apply
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in
the
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apply
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feeling
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feelings
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of guilt by telling lies . It creates honesty and loyalty in the
relationship
.
Moreover
, speaking
truth
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the truth
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helps
people
to know each other easily it
give
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gives
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transparency between
people
which results development of good
relationships
. Flipping to the other side,always telling
truth
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the truth
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is a good habit but sometimes it creates problems in
the
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apply
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relationships
and hurts
people
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people's
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loved ones. To illustrate, if a
person
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person's
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loved one got diagnosed with cancer and
person
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the person
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does not want to tell him/ her about
their
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disease because
may be
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maybe
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after knowing about
person
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a person
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get more depressed and unable to fight
with
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the problem.
Furthermore
, sometimes, in several situations
people
do not want to
listen
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the
truth
and offend each other so for
thr
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the
sake of saving
relationship
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the relationship
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not speaking
truth
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the truth
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Is good.
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To
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apply
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the
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apply
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conclusion, always telling
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the truth
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truth
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the truth
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and being honest in
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a relationship
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relationship
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a relationship
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is a very good method of making strong
relationships
. But sometimes for the happiness of
the
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their
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loved ones folks
needs
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need
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to speak
lie
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lies
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which helps them to not
hurting
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hurt
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their feelings.
Additionally
,
people
should always try
to does
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apply
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not
make
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to make
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any space
of
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for
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lie
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lies
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in their
relationships
and keep
try
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trying
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to speak
truth
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the truth
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in every
situations
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situation
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Honesty
  • Trust
  • Open communication
  • Misunderstandings
  • Hurtful
  • Justified
  • Cultural values
  • Integrity
  • Credibility
  • Blunt
  • Conflicts
  • Subjective
  • Perspectives
  • Relationship dynamics
  • Intimate connections
  • Protective lies
  • Ethical considerations
  • Transparency
  • Diplomacy
  • Authenticity
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