Write a letter to community health nurse
I am writing to refer Mr Phillip who is planning to move
Maroubra
for his multiple sclerosis treatment. He requires your continued care and support.
Mr Phillip was presented to the clinic with diagnosed multiple sclerosis,type 2 diabetes and chronic left and right Change preposition
to Maroubra
legs ulcer
. He Fix the agreement mistake
leg ulcers
was commence
on antibiotics and anti-diabetic medicine. He has monitored the signs of his MS relapse and his blood sugar level.Both his left and right Change the verb form
was commenced
legs
dressing were changed.He has Fix the agreement mistake
leg
educated
regarding the risk associated with diabetes as he has been Add a missing verb
been educated
non- compliance
with diabetic medicines.
Mr Phillip lives alone and has two sons.he has been managing his needs Correct your spelling
non-compliance
by
his pension. He has experienced loneliness Change preposition
with
as well as
isolated
. Replace the word
isolation
However
,he has stable mental health.
I would highly appreciate it if you could take over the management of the patient.please ensure his IV antibiotics switch to oral antibiotics but continue his same anti-diabetes medicine and also
monitor his dressing. Please refer him to Add an article
the prince
prince
of Capitalize word
Prince
wales
diabetic clinic regarding his medication review and Capitalize word
Wales
has
education on diabetes by Unnecessary verb
apply
doctor
. Kindly help him to contact a neurologist for MS Add an article
a doctor
the doctor
follow up
. Add a hyphen
follow-up
In addition
, kindly help him to contact with social
worker to cope Add an article
a social
the social
up
his situation.
Yours sincerely
NurseChange preposition
with
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