The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter . Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party . Explain why you won't be able to attend the party . Give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Dear Mr. and Madam Zare, I hope to find you well. I thank you for inviting me to Chris’s surprise party, I’m sure it will be one of the best parties that he had.

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, please accept my warmest congratulations. In fact,

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year when we lived at the dormitory, we had a nice habit that surprised our roommate because of their birthday, but when it was his birthday unfortunately had a bad illness and had to stay in hospital, in result we could not hold his party. So, I’m sure that

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party is really important to him and he will really enjoy it. I am writing

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letter that apologize because I am going to take an exam the same day as his celebration.

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, my university is located in another city and it is quite far, I am so sorry but I will not attend with you. I have some plans that I can visit your nice family, I can able to see you

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of May weather I will join you on the 15th of June. If these days are good for you, please

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tell me. I hope you consider my situation and accept my apologies. Best Regards, Ali

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better organization.

task response

Fully address all points of the task, including the reason for not attending the party and the plan to see Chris at a different time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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