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People in the community now could buy cheaper consumer goods. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #community #consumer #goods
If the
consumer
goods
 became cheaper,
buyer
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buyers
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 could have
unparallel
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unparalleled
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 choice for affordable commodities. Despite the fact that the phenomenon can
arise
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cause
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 some drawbacks, the benefits still overwhelm the disadvantages Cheaper
goods
 bring numerous pros.
Consumer
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The consumer
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 can purchase diverse types of good, especially good for
household
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the household
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 which has limited income. Cheaper
comodities
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commodities
also
 help poor people to get enough
goods
 for their life more easily. The gap between well-off and poor people will be
minimize
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, everyone can have a more equilibrium life. The energy will be purchased more which contributes to the development of
economy
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the economy
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.
However
,
this
phenomenom
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phenomenon
 has many drawbacks. A massive demand
require
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is required
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 to be satisfied but the profit is too small for the businesses.
This
 may lead to
the
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reduce
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of
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in
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products
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product
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 quality. With the lower quality products,
consumer
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the consumer
a consumer
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 will lose their trust in those product's manufacturers.
This
deal
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deals
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 a lot of damage to the economy. A massive demand
go
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along with
a massive factories
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a massive factory
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creating
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created
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 to meet the need which
cause
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causes
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pollutions
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pollution
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. In conclusion, the benefits of cheaper
consumer
goods
 still overshadow the
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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