The pie charts below show the percentages of expenditure on different items in the USA.
The pie chart above shows the expenses of items in The USA in the year
of
1966. The graph shows the percentage of Change preposition
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Food
, Cars, Petrol, Restaurants, Furniture, Computers, and Books expenditure
.
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expenditures
On the
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The
food
outflow shows Add a comma
food,
a
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percents
of Fix the agreement mistake
percent
Food
disburesement
as the highest Correct your spelling
disbursement
costs
of the USA. on Fix the agreement mistake
cost
the
second highest Capitalize word
The
expenditure
type is Cars rate ranging on
23%. Change preposition
at
This
overhead comes with the expenditure
with
the 9% petrol outflow rate.
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of
the
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are
less likely to spend their money on leisure activities expenses Wrong verb form
were
such
as computers
costs as shown in the data Fix the agreement mistake
computer
only
1% , Restaurants Change preposition
at only
on
7%, and housing costs needs like furniture Change preposition
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in
just 10%.
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Overall
, the highest expenditure
of the USA
people in the year 1966 Correct your spelling
US
are
on essential Wrong verb form
was
need
, like Fix the agreement mistake
needs
food
and drink; accomodation
; and household needs. Not so on the entertainment side.Correct your spelling
accommodation
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