Air freight have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it.
Plan have been grown
up
to Change preposition
apply
use
for fruits and vegetables to
various Change preposition
in
countries
where such
trees too
difficult to Add a missing verb
are too
increased
the age or change the season. Some citizens think that way is a great Change the form of the verb
increase
ideal
Correct your spelling
idea
whereas
another
people contrast Replace the adjective
other
to
that idea. In Change preposition
apply
this
essay
I will show both views and I Add a comma
essay,
more
like Correct quantifier usage
apply
use
Wrong verb form
using
Add an article
the plane
a plane
plane
to Fix the agreement mistake
planes
transport
healthy food
.
Firstly
, Add an article
the plane
a plane
plane
can be used to Fix the agreement mistake
planes
transport
healthy food
can
be Correct word choice
and can
more
faster Change the word
apply
in
far Change preposition
apply
distance
than Fix the agreement mistake
distances
another vehicles
. Aeroplanes Replace the adjective
another vehicle
other vehicles
also
can be a transportation to trade different types of fruits and vegetable
with a lot of Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
city
around the country and Change to a plural noun
cities
world
. Correct article usage
the world
In addition
, this
way will improve the relationship to each countries
. For Change to a singular noun
country
examples
, Fix the agreement mistake
example
Vietnam
really
popular Add a missing verb
is really
about
durian so Change preposition
apply
Vietnam
will trade that to take cherries in America. Moreover
, give
Wrong verb form
giving
food
to poor countries
by plane
show
that Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
it
really important and Add a verb
it is
it was
show
that Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
wealth
Replace the word
wealthy
countries
respect poor countries
. Also
Add a comma
Also,
Vietnam
was not really grow
up fast but Change the verb form
did not really grow
countries
around really respect
and Wrong verb form
respected
like
Wrong verb form
liked
Vietnam
.
On the other hand
, transport
by plane
will increase the price of that food
, increase
VAT so when the product Correct word choice
and increase
go
to the Change the verb form
goes
costumer
will Correct your spelling
customer
really
expensive Add a missing verb
be really
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
make
poor people Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
do
not have enough money to Unnecessary verb
apply
try
. Correct pronoun usage
try it
Furthermore
, this
way will use
a lot of fuels
to fly faster. Next Fix the agreement mistake
fuel
with
Change preposition
apply
that
, Correct pronoun usage
apply
use
Correct article usage
the use
plane
Change preposition
of plane
also
make the environment more badly by smoke.
Taking everything into account, I believe that use
aircraft to Wrong verb form
using
transport
fruits and vegetables have
more benefits for the government Correct subject-verb agreement
has
also
for the citizens because that Correct word choice
and also
help
people who live in Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
the
Correct article usage
apply
countries
do
not plant like Correct pronoun usage
that do
Africa
or Change preposition
in Africa
improve
the quality for citizens.Correct subject-verb agreement
improves
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