Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some coutries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it at a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The
exploaionn
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exploitation
of
aircraft
on delivering fruits and
vegetables
to several nations where can hardly have plants or
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reasons.
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, the opposites have
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different
opinion
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. The author of
this
essay would agree with the idea of using
aircraft
to help the poverty or nations which have
own
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reasons. It is vital to understand that the using of
aircraft
could help a country
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better. There are several developing countries or undeveloped countries
need
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more help from the world. The
supplyments
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of
aircraft
could reduce the poverty in Africa or nations
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which
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have
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the
goverment
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government
could not afford stable lives for their residents. The fresh fruits and
vegetables
give
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humans
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from those areas a good condition of living.
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lands could hardly grow plants
due to
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, drought or natural disasters made
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human's
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healthy
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return to unhealthy way because
of
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the reduction of plants and
vegetables
could rescue
human
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humans
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from unhealthy
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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without fresh food and improve
thier
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their
daily
life
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lives
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with better
condition
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.
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, it can be thought that
aircraft
does
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not always
use
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for
the
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positive purpose.
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Human
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can use the
aircraft
not only
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for
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to
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transport
the
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fruit
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fruits
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and
vegetables
,
and
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but
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also
use
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to provide drugs or addicting products.
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a
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research at the environmental
istitute
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institute
in California
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slows
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that 27% of the carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere, affecting the air quality of numerous countries are what air;ine are responsible for
this
immense amount of toxic chemical
subtances
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substances
emitted
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into
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the air is what needs to be concerned more than famine and crop losses. In general,
although
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makes
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a
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good transportation, does not mean that
it
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should be
over used
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overused
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.
Otherwise
, the world will have to face more serious environmental problems in the next decade leading to much more significant consequences.
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